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She turns on lights whenshe walksnecks too bend.She stayswhere she wantstastes whocomes to venther easeof her playlegs, armsmove this wayher skirthints mid thighI talknot, but sigh.~*~*~Eastern Wings...
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I liked this.BarryWe don't see things as they are, we see things as we are. - Anais Nin
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Thank you Barry, it is chinese verse meter Wu-Yen-ShihI appreciate your commentsOM~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's Respite~*~*~
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OM,Not at all familiar with the forum but I'm very impressed with the understated elegance of this poem. There exists such a natural flow that I didn't even notice the rhyme and alliteration 'til I...
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Thank you Wanda...it is a nice Chinese formOM~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's Respite~*~*~
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i too am not familiar with this form but i absolutely love this poem! ..very natural flow and rhythym..great piece!! inside each soul there is music...let the music play
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Thank you kindly moonflower!OM~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's Respite~*~*~
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Hey Alaura! Nice to see you about!Keep those poems coming, whereever you are posting.OM~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's Respite~*~*~
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Thank you Bro...It is a wonderful form that takes some getting used to to use...simplicity is zen gorgeous.OM~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's Respite~*~*~
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Jesse, post the guidelines to this form in the Reference Room if you'd like, it looks interesting. Poems For The Heart and Soul Please Drop by the Poetry Factory
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Hey there ma'am! It is a form where you write couplets, but are broken up by line, they rhyme, single syllable words only.two..three,two threeThey can be used, line wise as a sonnet, or other form...
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